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A gentle sigh escaped your thin lips. You and the main Axis Powers had been stranded on an abandoned southern island for a few days now. It was supposed to be up to Kiku, or Japan, to get transportation back to their base, but that didn't go exactly as planned. It seems when it comes to any type of transportation, Kiku was just as clueless as Feliciano, or Italy. You weren't exactly thrilled with being stuck on an island with three countries that bickered all the damn time. Especially Feli and Ludwig, also known as Germany. He was a total hardass to poor Feliciano. Ludwig was constantly training him, so much in fact that Feli would pass out with exhaustion. You would try to reason with the blue eyed nation, but he would only growl at you to stay out of it.

As you sipped from a coconut shell that was filled with coconut water, the sun began to set from behind you. You and the group had set up camp on the beach, since a fire could be easily seen from a wide open area. And because you didn't want to catch the entire jungle on fire. Conflict was stirring up between Ludwig and Feliciano for the millionth time that day. You didn't know how much more you could take of this. Kiku seemed to notice you're anger building up because he spoke up.

"Feliciano, let's go look for some more firewood. The fire is getting quite dull," the Japanese man said, standing up and putting his white military coat back on. Feliciano, who was balling, quickly perked up.

"Oh, okay, Kiku! Let's go!" he jumped up in a heartbeat and skipped behind Kiku as they disappeared into the jungle. You sighed in relief and drank more from the coconut. You glanced over at Ludwig, who was mumbling to himself in his native tongue. Probably complaining about Feli again, you thought bitterly to yourself. That's when you decided to say something to him.

"Ludwig, I understand that you want to make Feliciano stronger," you started, putting your drink down. When he was looking at you, you continued, "but I don't think scolding him to no ends meet will help him," Ludwig scoffed under his breath and tipped down his hat to cover his eyes.

"Don't be such a schwachkopf (Name). Strictness is the only thing that will get through to that pasta loving trottel," he told you, keeping his voice deep and stern. You never actually had a real conversation with Ludwig, only because you were scared on how he was. You didn't want to say the wrong thing and set him off.

"You've been giving him the "tough love" treatment for over two months now, and it hasn't gotten through to him. Have you ever thought about actually being nice to him?" the word "nice" was nowhere in the blonde's mental dictionary. A scowl swept over his chiseled face, causing you to cringe in fear.

"I will never be nice to him. If I am, he would just slack off all day and nap to his heart's content," he said to you, his voice raising. You sighed and went back to your drink, thinking that the conversation was over. Until you heard him mumble something under his breath. "Did you say something, Ludwig?" you asked, looking up from the coconut and at him. You failed to notice a tinge of pink on his pale white cheeks.

"Die einzige Person, die ich je schön wäre auf ist dass Sie," he muttered a little louder so that you could hear. Unfortunately, he spoke it in German so you didn't have a clue on what he said. Before you could ask him to repeat what he said in English, Kiki and Feliciano came back, carrying tons of firewood.

"This is all the firewood we could carry back. Hopefully, it will last us a few more days," Kiku said, dropping the wood by the fire. Feliciano mimicked the actions and plopped himself down next to you.

"Ahhh, now it's time for a pisolino!" Feliciano exclaimed, stretching his arms over his head and yawn. You giggled softly and criss crossed your legs. Kiku began to add more sticks into the roaring fire. Things were going just fine, until you heard a rustling. It was from the cliff top that looked down onto the camp. Ludwig and Kiku seemed to know who they were, but you and Feliciano were in a daze.

"The Allies seem to be here," Kiku said, standing up and grabbing the sheath to his samurai sword.

"Verdammt bastards," Ludwig added, as he grabbed his pistol and stood next to Kiku. You were about to ask what they meant, but you were interrupted by an obnoxious and loud laugh. That laugh. It could only be one person. You turned around and spotted the five Ally countries; Alfred, Arthur, Francis, Ivan, and Yao. All were holding a weapon of some sort.

"Oh, shit!" you scrambled to your feet and looked quickly for a weapon. The only thing you saw of use was a large log that Kiku and Feli had brought back. You clutched the log close to your body, and looked at Feli, who was frantically waving around a white flag in surrender. The Allies all looked down at the Axis Powers. That's when Arthur turned to Alfred.

"So, let me get this straight," he said in a low voice so the Axis couldn't hear, "All we're really here for is to kidnap the girl, right?" Alfred nodded.

"Totally! I've read enough comics to know that if you kidnap the girl in a group full of dudes, they'll come after her and surrender to us!" Alfred laughed with triumphant. "Alright!" Alfred pointed to Yao. "Yao! You take Kiku!" Then he pointed to Francis. "Francis, you get Feliciano!" Lastly, he pointed to Ivan. "Ivan! You go handle Ludwig! I'll get the girl!" And with that, all Allies jumped from the cliff top and landed before the four nations. You squeaked with surprise as you felt Ludwig pull you behind him.

"Don't worry, I'll protect you," he said to you. Feeling your cheeks heat up, you nodded.

Yao took out a wok and swung it at Kiku, who only dodged the attack. Kiku unsheathed his sword and countered it with Yao's next blow. Meanwhile, Francis held a rifle by his side, slowly coming towards Feli, who just wouldn't stop waving his flag and crying at the same time. Ivan held a field gun with him with a sinister smirk on his face, as he approached Ludwig. You stayed behind his back, worried and scared out of your mind. Suddenly, you felt someone grab you from behind and pull into them.

"H-hey! Let me go!" you screamed, squirming in your assailants grasp. It was Alfred who had grabbed you, and you found that out when you saw his common bomber jacket. "Ludwig! Help!" Ludwig gasped and glanced over his shoulder at you.

"(Name)!" as he tried to reach for you, a shot was fired. Your eyes shut tight at the loud noise that just erupted through the air. Slowly but surely, your eyes opened. What you saw was horrific. Ivan had fired his gun, and the bullet penetrated through Ludwig's arm. A shriek of pain left his throat as he fell to his knees. Kiku was unconscious and Feliciano was too scared to even move. You, on the other hand, was squirming wildly by now.

"No! Ludwig!" tears cascaded down your face as you saw blood run out of the wound and practically drown his whole arm. Alfred smirked with triumphant and nodded at Arthur. The Brit walked over to you and bounded both your wrists and ankles tightly together. And with that, you were tossed over the American's shoulder. "Put me down! I need to help them!" more and more tears fell, but none of the Allies gave in to your pleas. You caught one last glance at Ludwig, just in time to see his beautiful baby blue eyes one last time before they closed and his body fell slump onto the beach.
This looks like the other GermanyxReader I wrote a while ago, but I kinda like this one MUCH BETTER~

I'm still under the weather, so my German might be very wrong~ As well as some other things~ XDD I worked very hard on this, so I hope you all like it~ :la:

ENJOY~!!

Ludwig = Germany
Kiku = Japan
Feliciano = N. Italy
Alfred = American
Arthur = England/Britain
Francis = France
Ivan = Russia
Yao = China


Chapter 2 - [link]
Chapter 3 - [link]

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Hetalia © Hidkaz Himaruya
You © :iconsexygermanyplz::iconsexyitalyplz::iconsexyjapanplz:
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:icontitanhetalia:
TitanHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Good story, but for Japan you should use ENGRISH
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OriginalOtakuLuv Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*breaks free of bonds and whips out a bazooka* FUCK OFF MOTHER FUCKER ALLIES OR I WILL USE THIS!
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CreepyAnimeFreak02 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG u mispelled his name and put Kiki!
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NAGlTO Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just searched up the German part....cuz I don't know A DAMN SINGLE WORD ;x;
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CreepyAnimeFreak02 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And what did he say?
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NAGlTO Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
he said "The only person I would ever nice to you is that" like author-chan said, her german might be very wrong.
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:iconcreepyanimefreak02:
CreepyAnimeFreak02 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I get what its trying to say though. Thanks for meaning though./
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animeforever01 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist
Jack Sparrow Suprise  icon LUDWIG!Jack Sparrow Suprise  icon 
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:iconmy11hetalian2002love:
My11hetalian2002love Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
im about to punch some motherfers in da face Jack Sparrow Suprise  icon
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014   General Artist
-nibbles through ropes and kicks Alfred in the face- YOU HURT LUDWIG, YOU DECLARE WAR ON WONDERLAND AND IT AIN'T GONE BE PRETTY! -takes out cane with candy jewel on top and bashes America in the head a few dozen times-
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Darkestdragonwings Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
-a boot flies from the jungle and hits America in the head- 
-dark laughter is heard form the jungle w/ a low pitched howl-
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014   General Artist
AWAKIKI! (translation: Thank you! in Wonderlandion)
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:icondarkestdragonwings:
Darkestdragonwings Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
-an acknowledging hum sounds from right behind you-
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AimiinTARDIS Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Why no sub titles? :(
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
*quietly* no...
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:iconz0mgedelr1c:
Z0MGedELR1C Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-- :iconffffuuuuplz:
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FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
o uuuu o;;
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SonJessica Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
D': Luddy!! NO!!!
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GoldenWingedAngel Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LUDWIG!!!!!!!!!
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EmeraldPeacock Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013
awesome!
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :la:
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GreenEyedOkami Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student General Artist
can you........um....continue this story? PLEASE!
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
I already have chapters 2 and 3 up, I just forgot to put the links on this chapter. :iconmingplz:
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:icongreeneyedokami:
GreenEyedOkami Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
ok! I already found zem, but danke!
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awesome1st Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
MOR MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
There's two more chapters up c:
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XxGreyFeatherxX Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconspazattackplz:
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LightTheCat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
:iconmoarplz: MOREEEE! JYTGFYTUDYT/// I CAN'T TALK!
:iconcannotevenplz:
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Aly2840 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
nooooo..... Ludwiiiiiiig TT_TT ....... part 2 please ???? please?please?please ?please ? this was to awesome , you need to make a part 2 !!!!
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
I'm working on a part 2 right now and it should be posted by today. :aww:
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Saburner Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
please write more!!^^
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
I will! :la:
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andy4272 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
I wish I would have knocked Alfred out with mah log!
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
Pfft, I should have done that. XD
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andy4272 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
I would have died laughing if the reader was randomly swinging it around, knocked Alfred out with it and was like".....Did I do that?....."
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AmethystMoon420 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student General Artist
It's actaully coconut MILK, not coconut water... :3
But oks *continues reading*

*finishes* TT_____________TT
Is this going to be coninued?! I need to know what happened!!!
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, I'll be sure to fix it! Thank you for pointing it out. :la:

Yes, it will be continued. I don't know how many chapters though. :XD:
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AmethystMoon420 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconiloveitplz:
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tsayumi Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
woo! Drama! i love this!!more please!
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :la: And there will be more. :la:
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IAmDeprivedOfSleep Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
YES
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IAmDeprivedOfSleep Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmegustaplz: Thank you
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ChirikoMasashi Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Why did Germany have to die?! I should be in his place instead..... :'(
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
Don't worry, he's not dead. :aww: He just passed out is all.
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Sigity Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
He was only shot in the arm. He'll be fine as long as he cleans it.
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murrayb Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
more
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TheFigureInTheCorner Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbraginskiplz::iconkolkolplz: There will be more, da? ^J^
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:iconfearmypiplup:
FearMyPiplup Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
O.o Yes, there will be more.
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TheFigureInTheCorner Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay~! ^u^
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